bantha_fodder: ([muppets] on a pirate ship)
bantha_fodder ([personal profile] bantha_fodder) wrote2006-02-22 11:32 pm

[fic] don't want to see the end (a choose your own adventure)

A tingle in her toes, and the bubbles that rise to the surface are filled with songs. She drops her head down to her knees, and the tide is high enough that she can rest both ears below the water. Come follow me, they sing, and though the tunes are beautiful she resists their lure. From a distance, she watches as the merpeople dance and play together.

A merwoman floats forward. You should come closer, she says. You would love to dance with us.

Susan smiles sadly, and lifts her head from the water.

She will not run to sea.



If the merpeople kidnap Susan, turn to page nineteen.
If Susan goes to find Lucy and Edmund, turn to page twenty-six.
For A Surprise, turn to page three.
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[identity profile] scoured.livejournal.com 2006-02-22 07:57 am (UTC)(link)
I'm very very torn between nineteen and three, but I think I'll go for kidnapping. 19, please!

[identity profile] storydivagirl.livejournal.com 2006-02-22 09:32 am (UTC)(link)
If the merpeople kidnap Susan, turn to page nineteen.

::turns excitedly::

[identity profile] roz-mcclure.livejournal.com 2006-02-22 09:40 am (UTC)(link)
3!

[identity profile] corvidae9.livejournal.com 2006-02-22 12:52 pm (UTC)(link)
NINETEEN. Because she's better off with the merpeople than the Muggles. :P (yes, I'm mixing terms, and I'm alright with that) ooh! do the merpeople take her to Narnia where she slaps her brother for leaving her?

[identity profile] clannadlvr.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 10:07 am (UTC)(link)
Gorgeous. Gorgeous Gorgeous Gorgeous. You continue to floor me with the beauty of your prose.

Just...wow.