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bantha_fodder) wrote2006-02-22 08:20 am
bantha_fodder) wrote2006-02-22 08:20 am
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[fic] don't want to see the end (a choose your own adventure)
(from page one)
Page Five:
Susan holds at full draw. Her hold is not quite right, and she lets down, arrow still in the bow. A rustle to her left, but before she can turn, there is a hand on her shoulder. "Your shoulder is too high," says Peter, and squeezes the muscle under his hand.
Susan closes her eyes. Breathes out.
"I know," she says.
Peter leans closer. "You must be perfect, Sister.”
She opens her eyes again. “I know.” She lifts her bow and draws back, and does not look at her brother, though his hand his warm.
A squeal breaks the silence.
If Lucy is in danger, turn to page ten.
If Edmund is being a bit of a prig, turn to page twenty-one.
If Lucy is pleased about something, turn to page two.
Page Five:
Susan holds at full draw. Her hold is not quite right, and she lets down, arrow still in the bow. A rustle to her left, but before she can turn, there is a hand on her shoulder. "Your shoulder is too high," says Peter, and squeezes the muscle under his hand.
Susan closes her eyes. Breathes out.
"I know," she says.
Peter leans closer. "You must be perfect, Sister.”
She opens her eyes again. “I know.” She lifts her bow and draws back, and does not look at her brother, though his hand his warm.
A squeal breaks the silence.
If Lucy is in danger, turn to page ten.
If Edmund is being a bit of a prig, turn to page twenty-one.
If Lucy is pleased about something, turn to page two.
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