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bantha_foddertitle: the moments in between
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stars_like_dust and bantha_fodder
fandom: bsg
spoilers: none
disclaimer: we do not own these characters
rating: pg-13
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bijoux requested Kara/Lee/Helo + shower = hot, wet, steamy sexiness. This is only sort of that.
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Lee pushes the door to the bathroom open, trying not to think about what he's going to find inside. Yesterday he walked in on Hotdog wanking, and that's not exactly an experience he's eager to repeat.
The heat hits him like a sauna, and he gasps, blinking as he counts pilots in showers. Kara turns and smiles at him.
"Come to join us, Lee?" she asks, and laughs. Two shower heads down, Helo lathers up.
"Afternoon, Captain," Helo nods, before he turns to Kara. "I'm thinking of growing a beard. What do you think, Starbuck?"
"I think you'd look like shit, Helo," she says. He lifts an eyebrow as she laughs out, "plus, regs," and Lee watches the muscles in her back move as she rubs shampoo into her hair.
Lee turns away; quickly strips and steps under a shower head. He turns the water on hot.
He might be washing away his sins, but he thinks the stains go deeper than skin.
He rolls his back and tries to concentrate on the soreness of his muscles, but can't help looking over his shoulder when he hears a laugh behind him. He watches Helo throw a bar of soap at Kara, and it skids to a stop on the tiles beside her. She leans down to pick it up, water running in rivelets over her skin, and Lee thinks that maybe Helo threw it wonky on purpose.
He turns away.
Helo doesn't, and Lee watches Helo watching Kara.
Kara laughs, and Lee glances back at Kara. Kara's watching Helo; laughing with Helo.
This is not new.
"Soap?" he says, and Kara throws it to him. It's falling short and Lee lunges for it, starts to slip and Helo reaches out an arm and catches him. They stand there, Helo's hands heavy on Lee's shoulders, and they are warm and soft. Helo's hands will not break Lee's back, but they could.
Lee wonders whether eventually they will damage him deeper than his sins will.
And it's easy to stand there, under the warm spray and Helo's hands. It's easy to pull Kara in with one arm, close, so that her body fits neatly in the spaces between them.
*
Dee's sore from her chair in the CIC, and tired, and she thinks later that's why she didn't hear anything until she'd opened the door. She also tells herself that explains her complete inability to move for a moment after she worked out what was happening.
The water is falling around the three of them, wasting but recycling, and Helo's mouth is on Starbuck's neck, and Dee blushes as Apollo pushes Helo against the wall. She backs out, closes the door, and Starbuck's gasps echo in her ears as she walks blindly away.
*
Kara knows that this is dangerous. Slippery skin and wet kisses and the tiles under her feet. Pilots frak in the bathroom all the time, and Helo is known for it, but this is the CAG and this is Lee and there are three of them.
She's not sure she wants to think about it, but as Helo kisses her, Lee's hands skim down her sides and he presses a kiss between her shoulder blades and she shivers, even in the heat.
Lee's touch is soft and warm, maybe too soft, but he's offering and she's willing.
And so she kisses Lee, wraps an arm around his neck, and she wonders how much Helo has guessed. Most of it, she thinks. He was never stupid.
But then, given what they're doing, maybe they all are.
Please don't let anyone walk in, she thinks.
*
Dee gets halfway down a corridor on autopilot, but all she sees is water and steam and the look on Starbuck's face as she arched her neck back to give Helo more access, one of her hands spasming on the tiles and the other reaching out for Apollo. Gods, Dee thinks, coming to a halt and bringing one hand up to her forehead. Gods. Frak.
"Dee?"
Dee swallows, blinks and focuses. "Cally."
"You okay? You look kinda spaced out."
"Yeah. Well."
Cally puts her hand on Dee's arm, and Dee suddenly, violently, wants Billy. She wants what Starbuck just had. Is having.
"Dee? What's wrong?"
Dee licks her lips and pauses, but decides she needs to tell someone, anyone, or she'll go mad. She yanks Cally close to the wall and waits until the corridor is empty. "Okay, who are the two hottest men on Galactica?"
"Apollo and Helo," Cally answers without any hesitation. "Why do you ask?"
Dee knows her pulse is racing, she can feel it, and she wonders if something's wrong with her to be feeling like this. "Starbuck got them both," she says finally, and Cally looks confused. Wait for it, Dee thinks. Any second now...
And, like clockwork, Cally's face flushes bright red.
"Ohhh..." she breathes. "You serious?"
"In the shower."
"Oh my gods. Oh my gods. Did they see you?"
"No," Dee says, smoothing her sweaty palms on her uniform. "They were - otherwise engaged."
Cally shakes her head once, twice, and lets out a long slow breath. "I hate her."
They stand in silence for a minute, ignoring the curious look of the lieutenant that passes them.
Then, "Damn!" Dee says.
"What?"
"Billy's on Colonial One in meetings for the next two days."
"Dee!"
*
Lee can't breathe and he's blinking in the water as they push themselves apart. Kara's gasping, and Lee can't tell if the red tinge to her body is from the heat of the water or the heat beneath her skin.
Helo grins, and squeezes Lee's shoulder as he reaches for his towel.
When Hotdog opens the door, Kara's watching her feet as she tucks a towel around herself and Helo is brushing his teeth. Lee brushes past Hotdog and out the open door.
They don't speak of it.
This is not new.
*
Helo watches Apollo leave and turns back to Starbuck, who is running her hand through her hair and shaking out the water.
"Your neck is red," he tells her, and reaches out and places his fingers on her skin. "Here and here."
Behind them, the water starts to run again as Hotdog slips under a shower head.
"And whose fault is that?" she says. "You need to shave."
"I thought you liked me scruffy?"
She laughs and Helo notices the tension leaving her body. "You're never getting any again," she says.
"You've said that before."
"Bastard."
"You love me."
"I do," she says cheerfully. "Although the gods only know why."
And Helo relaxes, because this is the Starbuck he's used to; the one who'd give him hickeys in conspicuous places and watch him weasel his way out of teasing at lunches. He can understand this Starbuck. (The one he doesn't understand broke beneath Apollo's fingers and mouth five minutes ago.)
*
Cally watches them from across the hanger, over the edge of her clipboard. Starbuck and Apollo are trading insults with Helo and she hears slurs on 'raptors' and 'vipers' with increasing regularity. Cally fidgets with her pen, and wonders why she expected to see some tangible evidence that the three of them were frakking in the shower not an hour ago.
Starbuck looks up and for a second, her eyes hover on Cally and then she smiles and waves but Cally's too flustered to move until Starbuck turns away again, back to her conversation with the two men.
This is not new.
Starbuck laughs.
*
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authors:
stars_like_dust and bantha_fodderfandom: bsg
spoilers: none
disclaimer: we do not own these characters
rating: pg-13
please do not archive
bijoux requested Kara/Lee/Helo + shower = hot, wet, steamy sexiness. This is only sort of that.*
Lee pushes the door to the bathroom open, trying not to think about what he's going to find inside. Yesterday he walked in on Hotdog wanking, and that's not exactly an experience he's eager to repeat.
The heat hits him like a sauna, and he gasps, blinking as he counts pilots in showers. Kara turns and smiles at him.
"Come to join us, Lee?" she asks, and laughs. Two shower heads down, Helo lathers up.
"Afternoon, Captain," Helo nods, before he turns to Kara. "I'm thinking of growing a beard. What do you think, Starbuck?"
"I think you'd look like shit, Helo," she says. He lifts an eyebrow as she laughs out, "plus, regs," and Lee watches the muscles in her back move as she rubs shampoo into her hair.
Lee turns away; quickly strips and steps under a shower head. He turns the water on hot.
He might be washing away his sins, but he thinks the stains go deeper than skin.
He rolls his back and tries to concentrate on the soreness of his muscles, but can't help looking over his shoulder when he hears a laugh behind him. He watches Helo throw a bar of soap at Kara, and it skids to a stop on the tiles beside her. She leans down to pick it up, water running in rivelets over her skin, and Lee thinks that maybe Helo threw it wonky on purpose.
He turns away.
Helo doesn't, and Lee watches Helo watching Kara.
Kara laughs, and Lee glances back at Kara. Kara's watching Helo; laughing with Helo.
This is not new.
"Soap?" he says, and Kara throws it to him. It's falling short and Lee lunges for it, starts to slip and Helo reaches out an arm and catches him. They stand there, Helo's hands heavy on Lee's shoulders, and they are warm and soft. Helo's hands will not break Lee's back, but they could.
Lee wonders whether eventually they will damage him deeper than his sins will.
And it's easy to stand there, under the warm spray and Helo's hands. It's easy to pull Kara in with one arm, close, so that her body fits neatly in the spaces between them.
*
Dee's sore from her chair in the CIC, and tired, and she thinks later that's why she didn't hear anything until she'd opened the door. She also tells herself that explains her complete inability to move for a moment after she worked out what was happening.
The water is falling around the three of them, wasting but recycling, and Helo's mouth is on Starbuck's neck, and Dee blushes as Apollo pushes Helo against the wall. She backs out, closes the door, and Starbuck's gasps echo in her ears as she walks blindly away.
*
Kara knows that this is dangerous. Slippery skin and wet kisses and the tiles under her feet. Pilots frak in the bathroom all the time, and Helo is known for it, but this is the CAG and this is Lee and there are three of them.
She's not sure she wants to think about it, but as Helo kisses her, Lee's hands skim down her sides and he presses a kiss between her shoulder blades and she shivers, even in the heat.
Lee's touch is soft and warm, maybe too soft, but he's offering and she's willing.
And so she kisses Lee, wraps an arm around his neck, and she wonders how much Helo has guessed. Most of it, she thinks. He was never stupid.
But then, given what they're doing, maybe they all are.
Please don't let anyone walk in, she thinks.
*
Dee gets halfway down a corridor on autopilot, but all she sees is water and steam and the look on Starbuck's face as she arched her neck back to give Helo more access, one of her hands spasming on the tiles and the other reaching out for Apollo. Gods, Dee thinks, coming to a halt and bringing one hand up to her forehead. Gods. Frak.
"Dee?"
Dee swallows, blinks and focuses. "Cally."
"You okay? You look kinda spaced out."
"Yeah. Well."
Cally puts her hand on Dee's arm, and Dee suddenly, violently, wants Billy. She wants what Starbuck just had. Is having.
"Dee? What's wrong?"
Dee licks her lips and pauses, but decides she needs to tell someone, anyone, or she'll go mad. She yanks Cally close to the wall and waits until the corridor is empty. "Okay, who are the two hottest men on Galactica?"
"Apollo and Helo," Cally answers without any hesitation. "Why do you ask?"
Dee knows her pulse is racing, she can feel it, and she wonders if something's wrong with her to be feeling like this. "Starbuck got them both," she says finally, and Cally looks confused. Wait for it, Dee thinks. Any second now...
And, like clockwork, Cally's face flushes bright red.
"Ohhh..." she breathes. "You serious?"
"In the shower."
"Oh my gods. Oh my gods. Did they see you?"
"No," Dee says, smoothing her sweaty palms on her uniform. "They were - otherwise engaged."
Cally shakes her head once, twice, and lets out a long slow breath. "I hate her."
They stand in silence for a minute, ignoring the curious look of the lieutenant that passes them.
Then, "Damn!" Dee says.
"What?"
"Billy's on Colonial One in meetings for the next two days."
"Dee!"
*
Lee can't breathe and he's blinking in the water as they push themselves apart. Kara's gasping, and Lee can't tell if the red tinge to her body is from the heat of the water or the heat beneath her skin.
Helo grins, and squeezes Lee's shoulder as he reaches for his towel.
When Hotdog opens the door, Kara's watching her feet as she tucks a towel around herself and Helo is brushing his teeth. Lee brushes past Hotdog and out the open door.
They don't speak of it.
This is not new.
*
Helo watches Apollo leave and turns back to Starbuck, who is running her hand through her hair and shaking out the water.
"Your neck is red," he tells her, and reaches out and places his fingers on her skin. "Here and here."
Behind them, the water starts to run again as Hotdog slips under a shower head.
"And whose fault is that?" she says. "You need to shave."
"I thought you liked me scruffy?"
She laughs and Helo notices the tension leaving her body. "You're never getting any again," she says.
"You've said that before."
"Bastard."
"You love me."
"I do," she says cheerfully. "Although the gods only know why."
And Helo relaxes, because this is the Starbuck he's used to; the one who'd give him hickeys in conspicuous places and watch him weasel his way out of teasing at lunches. He can understand this Starbuck. (The one he doesn't understand broke beneath Apollo's fingers and mouth five minutes ago.)
*
Cally watches them from across the hanger, over the edge of her clipboard. Starbuck and Apollo are trading insults with Helo and she hears slurs on 'raptors' and 'vipers' with increasing regularity. Cally fidgets with her pen, and wonders why she expected to see some tangible evidence that the three of them were frakking in the shower not an hour ago.
Starbuck looks up and for a second, her eyes hover on Cally and then she smiles and waves but Cally's too flustered to move until Starbuck turns away again, back to her conversation with the two men.
This is not new.
Starbuck laughs.
*
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Date: 2005-03-22 10:52 pm (UTC)I love the Dualla and Cally exchange. Cally really serves as a witness to everything on board doesn't she, oh, except she missed this one.
Well done!
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Date: 2005-03-22 11:07 pm (UTC)Glad that you liked it. And
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Date: 2005-03-22 11:06 pm (UTC)okay, the hotness meter just broke. I will have to judge hotness comparatively from now on, so provide more examples please.
Great work guys, this is fantastic.
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Date: 2005-03-22 11:31 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2005-03-22 11:12 pm (UTC)*reads*
*dies*
Poor, POOR Dee. She only has her fingers for help.
*pats Cally*
Is it wrong of me to love Kara/Helo?
Hrm.
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Date: 2005-03-22 11:31 pm (UTC)I know. And then she went an inflicted the image on Cally. Heh.
Is it wrong of me to love Kara/Helo?
NO! YOU MUST! So totally frak buddies omg.
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Date: 2005-03-22 11:20 pm (UTC)Serious guh and seriously fabulous.
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Date: 2005-03-22 11:31 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2005-03-22 11:40 pm (UTC)*brain melts from major hotness of fic*
I am at a loss for words, really, except Holy Frak, that was really nice and also pretty in a Helo realizing that a simple frak with Kara and Lee is never simple kind of way. Okay, not making sense. Sorry.
And Helo relaxes, because this is the Starbuck he's used to; the one who'd give him hickeys in conspicuous places and watch him weasel his way out of teasing at lunches. He can understand this Starbuck. (The one he doesn't understand broke beneath Apollo's fingers and mouth five minutes ago.)
I really liked that passage, for some reason.
But anyway, yes, thank you. And now some friending is in order, because I meant to earlier, but forgot, but now I have to because how could I not? :D
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Date: 2005-03-23 05:46 am (UTC)Heh. Well, world domination is our eventual plan. Every bit of adoration helps. ;)
*brain melts from major hotness of fic*
Oh noes!
I am at a loss for words, really, except Holy Frak, that was really nice and also pretty in a Helo realizing that a simple frak with Kara and Lee is never simple kind of way. Okay, not making sense. Sorry.
*laughs* We got it. Thanks. :)
I really liked that passage, for some reason.
So did we. *g*
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Date: 2005-03-22 11:44 pm (UTC)Nice writing!
Favourite line: (The one he doesn't understand broke beneath Apollo's fingers and mouth five minutes ago.)
Sums it up very well.
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Date: 2005-03-23 05:52 am (UTC)Heh. Kara/Helo are SO TOTALLY FRAK BUDDIES. (Me and Pen are out to indoctrinate the WORLD.)
Nice writing!
Thanks so much.
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Date: 2005-03-22 11:45 pm (UTC)Dammit, yer turning me into a fan of these Kara/Karl frakfiks, stop it. ;-)
Nice work. Love how others got involved....er, so to speak.
Was Dee imagining herself in that sitch? Hmm....
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Date: 2005-03-23 05:54 am (UTC)Kara/Helo is totally the new otp. *g*
Nice work. Love how others got involved....er, so to speak.
HA! (And thanks. Glad you liked it.)
Was Dee imagining herself in that sitch? Hmm....
Not my place to say. ;)
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Date: 2005-03-23 12:39 am (UTC)I saw this on my flist and had to read it before bed. So glad I did...
Loved the inclusion of Dee and Cally. Very nice touch.
helo/starbuck shall take over the world!
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Date: 2005-03-23 05:57 am (UTC)Yay! It was so much fun to write, too, although after four hours of staring blankly at the screen, we stopped picking up on mistakes. Which we then saw the minute we posted, AS USUAL.
I saw this on my flist and had to read it before bed. So glad I did...
Hee! We're glad too.
Loved the inclusion of Dee and Cally. Very nice touch.
Yeah, they just wrote themselves in there.
helo/starbuck shall take over the world!
Oh, yes. So will Helo/Starbuck/Apollo, if me and pen have any say at all. *g*
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Date: 2005-03-23 03:05 am (UTC)Utterly perfect.
I hate y'all, in the best possible way of course. Like, in the way that I'll find a way to blackmail y'all into writing more K/L/H cos it MUST be done.
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Date: 2005-03-23 06:10 am (UTC)That is my favourite line out of the entire piece.
I hate y'all, in the best possible way of course. Like, in the way that I'll find a way to blackmail y'all into writing more K/L/H cos it MUST be done.
Blackmail away! In addition, if you can't find anything to blackmail us about, Claira and I accept all forms of schmoopy (or angsty) pre-mini K/L, which I know you'd love to write us... *hints*
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Date: 2005-03-23 03:49 am (UTC)am incredibly jealousloved this story so frickin' much. you hear that? you suck!ah, i love dualla wanting her man. and helo in the shower. and cally's blush, and her 'i hate her' and then getting all shocked when dee says that she wants billy back from C1. cally is such a dorkhead, i luv her so.
and helo in the shower. and kara with hickeys. and dee getting all hot and bothered. and kara laughing. and lee all catholic and guilt-trippy.
and i mentioned helo in the shower? and you guys suck - you know that, right?
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Date: 2005-03-23 06:07 am (UTC)am incredibly jealousloved this story so frickin' much. you hear that? you suck!You are blatantly jealous like a jealous thing!
cally is such a dorkhead, i luv her so.
She is so adorkable, although not as adorkable as Billy.
and i mentioned helo in the shower?
Yes, several times. Did that really stick with you, did it? Helo, glistening and covered in water, soapy, rubbing his hands over his skin?
and you guys suck - you know that, right?
Yes. Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
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Date: 2005-03-23 04:28 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-03-23 05:57 am (UTC)...perhaps I should frown about the Kara/Cally?
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Date: 2005-03-23 04:54 am (UTC)Re: Wow!!!!
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Date: 2005-03-23 05:35 am (UTC)2. This story is ... HOT. Even though you're doing this Kara/Helo thing that makes me CRY because you're already bored with my OTP ;) Sniff! SNIFF!! But DAMN. Hot! And I love how Lee is always guilty about everything. Heh!
3. The only, ONLY tiny, tiny thing I would change is to substitute "jerking off" for "wanking" because of the American-ness of the setting, yeah? but otherwise fantastic.
4. Don't you break Helo's heart here!!
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Date: 2005-03-23 05:42 am (UTC)2. Do not FEAR! We have not forsaken the OTP, because they are the hot and angsty OTP. There shall be some more Kara/Lee real soon now. And Lee shall be beaten up and shirtless, for extra angst.
3. Hmm. AMERICANS. I used 'vying for a shag' today. You guys just don't know how to utilise the English language.
4. Shall, so you hush.
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Date: 2005-03-23 05:55 am (UTC)Really liked this:
And Helo relaxes, because this is the Starbuck he's used to; the one who'd give him hickeys in conspicuous places and watch him weasel his way out of teasing at lunches. He can understand this Starbuck. (The one he doesn't understand broke beneath Apollo's fingers and mouth five minutes ago.)
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Date: 2005-03-23 06:14 am (UTC)I shall let you do that because you finished my b'day fic. Seven months LATE, but whatever. *g*
And Helo relaxes, because this is the Starbuck he's used to; the one who'd give him hickeys in conspicuous places and watch him weasel his way out of teasing at lunches. He can understand this Starbuck. (The one he doesn't understand broke beneath Apollo's fingers and mouth five minutes ago.)
Thanks. That was one of our favourite parts as well. *g*
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Date: 2005-03-23 06:41 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2005-03-23 07:47 am (UTC)(The one he doesn't understand broke beneath Apollo's fingers and mouth five minutes ago.)
Best line, by far. *LOVE*
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Date: 2005-03-24 06:05 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-03-23 09:06 am (UTC)Wow. I am *so* on the Helo/Starbuck bandwagon. Frakbuddies, yeah. :P
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Date: 2005-03-24 06:06 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2005-03-23 09:21 am (UTC)I read this last night, and when thinking about it kept me awake this morning through a Very Boring lecture on abdominial trauma, I realized I had to comment. Everyone else already quoted my favorite line, though. I'll have to chose my second favorite!
And so she kisses Lee, wraps an arm around his neck, and she wonders how much Helo has guessed. Most of it, she thinks. He was never stupid. But then, given what they're doing, maybe they all are.
May I friend?
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Date: 2005-03-24 06:07 am (UTC)You are of course welcome to friend, but please remember that two of us wrote this. :o)
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Date: 2005-03-23 10:15 am (UTC)This is the Kara/Lee/Helo shower fic we've all been waiting for, and the wait was worth it. Lucky, lucky Kara...
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Date: 2005-03-24 06:08 am (UTC)Glad you enjoyed. :o)
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Date: 2005-03-23 12:02 pm (UTC)Lee just makes me want to cry out of sheer boredomI'm not so much of a Lee fan, but I liked the Lee you wrote here.And did I say hot?
Kara/Helo are SO TOTALLY FRAK BUDDIES.
Of course, they are! I thought this was common knowledge. KaraandHeloforevalovecrushsex [/end fangirl] //winks//
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Date: 2005-03-24 06:10 am (UTC)That is because it is the MENAGE A HOTT.
You need to read more Lee. He is angsty and guilt-ridden and angry and HOT.
I thought this was common knowledge.
ALAS, it is not, although Claira and I are working on converting the world.
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Date: 2005-03-23 01:33 pm (UTC)um... excuse me... gotta go take a shower now. yeah. that's it...
[wow. excellent.]
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Date: 2005-03-24 06:15 am (UTC)Thanks so much. *g*
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Date: 2005-03-23 02:16 pm (UTC)"Okay, who are the two hottest men on Galactica?"
"Apollo and Helo," Cally answers without any hesitation. "Why do you ask?"
I love this part, it's funny and realistic. That so would be a question that everyone would talk about and know the answer to. Also the "I hate her" reaction, which is exactly what I would say in that situation. Hee!
The only thing that threw me out of the story a little bit were the parenthesis. I totally don't think you need them. But I do love it, highly enjoyable reading and thank you both very much!
Damn lucky Starbuck.
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Date: 2005-03-24 06:18 am (UTC)Thanks so much. And it SO COULD HAPPEN. Me and pen are on a mission to convert the rest of the fandom.
I love this part, it's funny and realistic. That so would be a question that everyone would talk about and know the answer to. Also the "I hate her" reaction, which is exactly what I would say in that situation. Hee!
My reaction would be "I hate her" as well, no question. I want just ONE of them. And thanks. The Cally and Dee part was so much fun to write.
The only thing that threw me out of the story a little bit were the parenthesis. I totally don't think you need them. But I do love it, highly enjoyable reading and thank you both very much!
Ah, well, can't win them all. Very pleased you enjoyed it, though. :)
Damn lucky Starbuck.
Yeah. The bitch. *g*