I'm so glad you like it. :) I'm afraid I ran out of time fully incorporating Lucy, or Jadis, or you know all the other characters that could have been fleshed out with a thousand more words or so. Maybe this calls for a sequel or a prequel? Heh. :)
BTW, I read your Narnia fics and I really like your Lucy with all her sharp glittering edges.
Oh, it's wonderful just how it is! Edmund was just perfect. But, you know, if you wanted to write more, at no point would I be adverse to that. The world always needs more well-written Narnia fic.
And thank you for saying so. I love my Lucy. So smart but so naive.
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Date: 2005-01-01 10:45 pm (UTC)BTW, I read your Narnia fics and I really like your Lucy with all her sharp glittering edges.
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Date: 2005-01-02 06:48 pm (UTC)And thank you for saying so. I love my Lucy. So smart but so naive.